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Monday, December 17, 2018

Week 1 - Task 2

My hometown Wellington.

Wellington is an exquisite place to visit in my opinion. Although there can be strange weather changes, it is also a place filled with cultural people and friendly citizens. Speaking of friendly citizens, my cousins and aunties live in the capital, but one of the top 3 reasons why I love my hometown is the intriguing wildlife that lurks within their forests, like the Pukaha Mount Bruce.

By Cleo

3 comments:

  1. Awesome Cleo
    great that you talked about your own opinions. Next time you can work on your punctuation. I really liked how you added lots of proper noun and common nouns

    keep the great work flowing

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  2. Hi Cleo,
    it's me Melita. You'll have done a great Job by sharing information about your hometown. I loved how you used proper grammar and punctuation. I really like how you have structured your writing and how you have used so many different descriptive words. keep it the great work.

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  3. Talofa Cleo,

    Cia here from the Summer Learning Journey Ako Hiko team.

    You must miss windy Wellington, especially if you have lots of family that live there! I like that you have included a place here that people could visit particularly if they love animals. I think when I visit my own family in Wellington I'll stop by Pukaha Mount Bruce Wildlife Park, I'd love to go on one of their night walks.

    I myself was born and raised in the big bustling city of Auckland. One of my favourite things to do in Auckland is swim at Mission Bay Beach and admire the beautiful fountain that has been there for many years.

    Perhaps next time you could include your favourite place to visit in Wellington and include some pictures.

    I look forward to reading more of your posts over the summer.

    Toe feiloa’i fo’i (See you again!),

    Cia.

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